What this desperately needed was another verse, or at least a bridge of some sort. I couldn't puzzle out what the heck it should be though; so I contented myself with adding short bass runs to the end of the twelve-bar segments. The song after all, was written to fit the main bass riff, so I figured a few additions to it would surely stir the creative juices.
Nope. (Though I do like the additional phrasing.)
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